Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, May 23, 2014

Out For Duck Comments

Rating: 5.0

If player is out for duck
His chances are struck
He is not chosen as player again
He has to sit in pavilion
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Sherri Coulter 24 May 2014

Player is out for health, of the young, not future health scare with minimal care. Blunt-ly spoken by this tokin.

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Needs Revision Anwuar Abdalah36 minutes ago I enjoyed it but I felt that some of the wording was awkward at some points and completely distracted the flow of the poem. For this reason I give 3 stars, but in general it is fairly good- as well as its message. :)

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If player is out for duck His chances are struck

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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