Sunday, February 21, 2016
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One morning before the sun comes
When cold misty dawn garlanded
My garden, a high pitched whistle of
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7/19/2025 4:14:39 AM # 1.0.0
According to my point of view I suppose that this poem has an indirect relevancy with the topic.. however the poem is quite extraordinary.. GREAT!
Thank you Eobard, I appreciate your comment. You have a good point there.Either I sould change the topic or or add one or two more verses linking with the topic. I need soemone to criticise poetry than sharing. and Many thanks for pointing out a significant weakness in the poem.