Wednesday, October 22, 2014

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Rating: 5.0

We play with hours' soul,
and make feel other happy.
Actually, we ride on the horse
of time to reach near another fake point.
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Neela Nath Das
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Sekharan Pookkat 27 October 2014

Thousand drops can't fill The quench of a thirsty sea But one drop of love Can fill our heart for ever- nice penning

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 October 2014

Wow.....Beautiful flow like ocean. Very true said, we run behind mirages and run to reach fake point. Thoughtful write... Loved it.

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Leloudia Migdali 23 October 2014

Yes! A very nice poem and so deep!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 October 2014

As deep as ocean- Actually, we ride on the horse of time to reach near another fake point. superb thank you

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