Friday, October 17, 2008

Our Worlds Battle Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a world so cold sometimes so cruel
We face a battle
good against bad
a devastating duel
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Jacqueline Louw
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Nooh Ainul Islam 17 October 2008

beautiful poetic piece

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1khmerking Kampuchea 17 October 2008

This poem speak to me. I love how you put these word into sets of stanzas. This remind me of my old friends and how we made ourself into enemies and somehow our friendship doesn't connect anymore. This is also making me wonder that true friendS is hard to come by. I LOVE THIS POEM! ! ! KEEP IT COMING!

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