Our Whole Truth Poem by me poet yeps poet

Our Whole Truth

Rating: 3.6


I'm nearing 83
may soon be joining
those in the universe
who now with each other
distantly silently converse

this verse is about those
who have become ashes
else are buried comfortably
six feet beneath
gradually moths will have a feed
may take years
who knows

Do we
or
ye

Friday, March 25, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: life,death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
TRUTH OF COMING AND GOING
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 28 March 2022

Touching poem..........well written..

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Unwritten soul 26 March 2022

Robert has written thousands of poems that will all become nothing but forgotten dust. Like his body. Mine will live forever and become #1! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2022

Dreadful poem rewrite!

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Richard Wlodarski 25 March 2022

Excellent poem, MPYP. Especially, 'distantly silently converse'.

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me poet yeps poet 25 March 2022

IF U BELIEVE SAY SOMETHINGG IF U DON'T THE SAY SOMETHING ELSE

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