Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Our Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our love is a quiet moment,
In the chaos of daily living,
Our desires are like an eternal flame,
We have mastered the art of giving,
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Hazel Durham
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Allotey Abossey 09 June 2015

Our love is a quiet moment, In the chaos of daily living, Our desires are like an eternal flame, We have mastered the art of giving, What an art of writing?

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Ramesh Rai 18 November 2014

We flourish and nourish, Our differences, With mutual respect, And our experience intact, We live every moment, beautiful. Loved your every write.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 November 2014

Love is a source of beauty and joy. An amazing poem...............10

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 14 November 2014

Each day, The joy we feel is the love we give Our way. A well written poem portraying the importance of life in real life.I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Valsa George 14 November 2014

This bond of our two souls will never stop, We flourish and nourish, Our differences, With mutual respect, The affirmation and proclamation of a great love experience strengthened by emotional and physical intimacy! When two entities come together, it is natural to have differences, but if they are nourished or even tolerated with respect, their love will turn out to be an ever growing experience! Great poem!

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Jak Black 13 November 2014

This is a corker, Hazel. You've really pulled out all the stops with this one. Straight from the depths of your heart, this can't be all imagination has to be from experience as well. A wonderful use of words, captivating the very essence of love.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 November 2014

Beautifully lifted and gone up to the end, very interesting poem you wrote Hazel- Our love is a quiet moment, In the chaos of daily living, thank you for share

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