Friday, December 15, 2017

Our Village Girl Comments

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At the break of the dawn
When silence rules over the lands
I hear the sound of her tender feet
Walking down slowly over the sands
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2017

Silence rules over the lands when dawn comes. Tender sound of tender feet of village girl is heard from far. She sings and goes to river for taking bath. She does not look at any one. She believes in herself and she talks in mind. An amazing poem is beautifully and brilliantly penned...10

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 December 2017

Tried to give it a rural color. Thanks Sir for support.

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