Sunday, February 3, 2008

Our Universal Womb Comments

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Once, when time was upon nothing more
than itself and matter was yet to be conceived...
The universe lay barren as a vast Womb in space.
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Louie Levy
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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 September 2008

Sir, I understood this one! Great conception. Great write.......Classical style.

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Abha Sharma 27 April 2008

Why this poem is left unread till now…? ? ? A nice analogy of the birth of time, space and matter from the womb of universe…the conceiving, zygote’s development, umbilical bond, maternal relations, mid wife…all these similes are refreshing and thoughtful…. The poem takes us to the labor room where the universe gives birth to this world…our good earth…[ We all belong to the same family, a kind message to this world as well] the evolution dealt in a very unique way…. Thank you, I am lucky to have read this one.

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