Our Unholy Grails Comments

Bravo! Courageous are your controversial provocation. Un-Wholey have become likewise, lost religious empty Icons- The while, their never ever actually serving for Peace on Earth Your in-depth feeling of Empathy is Majestic Will thee, then gifted Bard, for Earth's sake and that of her offspring, suggest as to how Peace can and will surely prevail - IF? ? ? . ...louie levy

This was interesting . It was written very well and worthy of a recommendation. The ending I thought was the most important part and distinguishes it from mos other writings on the subject. GW62

a powerpacked poem! intense!

if only leaders understand the value of unity and peace we all can enjoy the peaceful earth.... nice poem

If two leaders do not agree, then millions die for their sake in a war. Your poem speaks well of this truth.

Very intense.Good theme and good write10 and more

amazingly insightful!

Dear Sathya thanks for sharing this piece. I liked it much much. But I told you earlier that I am now a devil.My beloved made me a devil.Because I have disobeyed Him. I am now in conflict with Him. I hate war.But my beloved keep silent when earth is bleeding.

Sathya, Nice read. A sneaky peep in the dusty pages of history...

I am a budding poet.Is the poem complete (some doubts in my mind) . Presents history and exploitation of earth with real life situations.Nice use and mix of words.

unfinished work but strong start. sjg

a heart felt defensive offensive cry for the sake of those who suffer on account of the cruelty of this world...good theme...more important is the neat well worded poem style...10/10

Good work sathya, keep writing

Very much to my way of thinking thankyou 10 Paris

intense write.. meaningful.. unholi grails is a powerful work from your pen good Sarthya 10 Rema

Sath, So very true. I love your finishing line