Friday, January 20, 2017

Our Twin Granddaughters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chelsea and Ashley Who Live in New York

From horizon to horizon, across the vast opaque of our lives,
Two living meteorites have ignited our life with the flame of affection.
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Lynn W. Petty
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Glen Kappy 14 November 2017

Lynn, I read this poem two mornings ago when our seven-year old granddaughter was staying over. I like this poem—it’s accessible and articulate. I especially like the image “the vast opaque of our lives.” Now I’m hoping this response will actually go through—my first longer message didn’t due to some buggy software (I’m guessing) . The best to you. Glen Kappy .

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 May 2017

As the rate describes. Thanks

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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