Monday, August 18, 2008

Our Time And Place Comments

Rating: 5.0

We live in time
not the place we’re in
We can change the place
but not the time.
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Ben Gieske
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 18 August 2008

interesting! could you read my new poems too? thank you.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 August 2008

‘we live in time’ is a good proposition to make…light and night being the basic measurable units of time the statement 'colors blend in them' is also true in both ways…sent in, here, pre programmed, any attempt to edit or delet that ‘head ware’ will prove futile…and deciphering it… most welcome…not to find out how the program runs…but to realize what the program is meant for us… an unusually long write from Ben…goes a long way in telling the truth of birth life and death in a typical, striking way…good composition… grade ten plus

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