Sunday, November 22, 2009

Our Time. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rainbowing sky is fading.
Sandy dunes move slightly
While shivering
In the evening breeze,
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Fay Slimm
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Bursting with beauty.....

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Stephen Stirk 05 December 2009

Beautiful, with a element of British coastline, that I can relate to. A warm piece Best Steve 10

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David Harris 26 November 2009

Fay, loved the soft romantic feel with this beautiful poem as it takes us with the lovers along a quiet beach. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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fine poem on developing love.. :)

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Marieta Maglas 22 November 2009

Out time has just begun. wonderful descriptive analytical poem 10++++++++++

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Patti Masterman 22 November 2009

An intriguing and inviting atmosphere lives here in this one, Fay. (smile)

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Tsira Goge 22 November 2009

Fay, Is so fine...The rainbow only will be sign of happiness.. 10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Daniel Kempson 22 November 2009

Nice sweet reflective poem Fay 10 Daniel

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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