Rainbowing sky is fading.
Sandy dunes move slightly
While shivering
In the evening breeze,
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Beautiful, with a element of British coastline, that I can relate to. A warm piece Best Steve 10
Fay, loved the soft romantic feel with this beautiful poem as it takes us with the lovers along a quiet beach. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David
Out time has just begun. wonderful descriptive analytical poem 10++++++++++
An intriguing and inviting atmosphere lives here in this one, Fay. (smile)
Fay, Is so fine...The rainbow only will be sign of happiness.. 10.. Best wishes, Tsira
Bursting with beauty.....