Shades of life return,
as our sun, brush paints
a landscape of love,
to brighten up our globe.
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I love to think of the sun painting.Your poem is filled with light. As always, Sandra
This poem is an open call to all Come out from those daily deal of juggles There is so much to learn from nature. Catch those revealing pearls If captured inside, nothing can be seen. Good one. Enjoyed the theme. Thank you.
Yes; Sun reveals...but it seems humans have only eyes and no visions proper... beautiful awareness poem Bob..the economy of words there in conveying your message is really admirable...thanks...10
'Nature made clear, the fruits of field and forest, give knowledge of path to our enlightenment.' you know sir, i just returned from a complicated lecture...and read this one..just relaxed my mind....filled me with great contentment....nice refreshment indeed...enjoyed it as if i m drinking Mango nectar..thank you for this one...10++ regards shan
lovely write bob..a picture of sun with a message.....10
A palette of wisdom, a brush of love and a poem of great beauty. 10 Karin Anderson
yes a beautiful write indeeed...nice refreshing one indeeed....enjoyed it very much...great poem to get away from the complexities of Econ and Mathematical calculations.... thanks for this one sir 10+++ with love shan
sun is the best source of energy, sun gives life to all living things..sun reveals all the hidden moments of darkness.if it is compared to life, it drives ourself well..grace
wonderful picture you have created with the sun being central with mottled hues excellent write -10 anjali
Bob..I read EVENING first and said there that you are unique... and I reiterate there is only one Bob Blackwell...you have the most wonderful nature and it reflects in your heartfelt poetry.. Thank you for sharing and helping me...best regards Alf
Mottled colours are an ideal way of description of sun at times Bob and this piece is filled with bright aspects of the blessings the sun bestows... many thanks for sharing.... love Fay....10/10
The warmth of the sun matches the warmth in your heart Bob! wonderful poem regards Bob
If we ponder our vision around, Nature has made several objects that trigger us in certain ways. It is just the sluggishness of human mind that fails to conceive the motivating features around. The imagery is just perfect in describing the peculiarities of love, motivation and a pragmatic way forwards.......10/10
Now, if everyone in the world read this poem, what peace and understanding and love it would bring.
Lovely imagery in this poem Bob, the sun being the giver of warmth and life, 10 Lynda xx
a lovely poem Bob. Sun, dispels darkness, brings light and life and energises everything that opens itself to recieve it. every morning in our indian culture some of us begin the day by making offering to Sun for blessing us with life generously. 10 Mamta
Love when you paint nature Bob- if we look at berries in red amongst green leaves, the sun shining, tempting - yet a message is sent - I am poison - how wonderful - like your poem..thank you
Bob, one of my favourite poems of yours. Inspiring lines of how the sun forms a palette of life illuminating the universe. Thanks for sharing very much and best wishes to you. Yelena M.