Our Sun
on edge
of world
signals
...
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sir, this is a great philosophical piece.....I truly admire this one. regards, vaibhav.
I can feel the kind warmth of a winter sun as I read this. And warmth always has the power to take the shaow from our souls. Beautiful write. As always, Sandra
Sun is lifeline for all living beings. Thank God it is free for all and there is no tax on it. Otherwise nothing is free in this corporate world.
nice Our Sun you know in hindu mythology the sun is revered as a God as God Ravi. wonderful tribute to the sun God -10 anjali
I can see your blood red sun just slipping below the horizon, its shimmering last rays cross the veldt, silhouettes of wildebeest casting long shadows, twilight takes over. lovely poem Bob
Our sun........Oh beautiful....one! ! well penned......a great tribute
A heartwarming poem (Our Sun) a delightful an radiant work of art! ! *10*! ! Best regards Bob! Friend Thad
what a free, he sun's warmth, what a work from mother sun- alovely piece-10
cues from celestial kins- such a lovely poem- our Sun on edge of world signals days rush has finished- but who pays heed. a very fine message Bob. i love the poem and the way you start it.10 Mamta
A sun..who saves our day..lights us..despite the shadows behind us.. Nice concept..fine imagery..poetic... A masterpiece!
Most powerful thoughts to I does this bring warmth o spring..Thank you most kind..Sir..
a 'sun'ny poem...'moon a lightened mirror' is wonderful poetic phrase..refreshing and pleasing write, Bob...10
Our sun is like this poem. This is the best describtion for sun.