Monday, April 12, 2010

Our Souls Comments

Rating: 4.7

What will our souls reveal
If the layers back you peal
People only the surface see
And not what inside may be
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Vaughn Bekker
May
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Ember Hathaway 25 May 2010

this is awesome! ! ! ! i really love this poem

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Ember Hathaway 25 May 2010

this is awesome! i absolutly love this poem! ! ! !

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Samuel Popeil 11 May 2010

really awsome poem

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fajjot fajjot 08 May 2010

Very good, Well written...

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Tammi Celina Lyons 06 May 2010

very amazing...and true to what you say...

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Bhaskar Dahal 06 May 2010

Appealing... characterizes the human without soul to judge..

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Ashley Pruett 06 May 2010

Wow amazing! ! ! Your poem speaks to my heart and soul, but I don't think most people really care any more about others feelings.

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Taylor Kincherlow 04 May 2010

U shud listen to Jimi Hendrix-if 6 was 9 and bob marley- could you be loved(i think) u wud seriously get sum inspiration from them two because they speak the same as you do u wud love it if u alreadi havent heard it haha!

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Olivia Helmes 26 April 2010

This poem is absolutely AWESOME! and yes the caps is neccesary. The flow was very well done and the images portrayed worked very well with the tone. Very Amazing job. My favorite line is every soul needs a seed, amazing idea. Keep up the brilliant work!

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Rachael Curtis 25 April 2010

Very nice! It has a very strong and clear message which you have conveyed nicely. You have used quite clever rhymes too! Good work! =D

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Hanna T 12 April 2010

O_O wow its amazing i absolutely love it: D

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