What will our souls reveal
If the layers back you peal
People only the surface see
And not what inside may be
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Wow amazing! ! ! Your poem speaks to my heart and soul, but I don't think most people really care any more about others feelings.
U shud listen to Jimi Hendrix-if 6 was 9 and bob marley- could you be loved(i think) u wud seriously get sum inspiration from them two because they speak the same as you do u wud love it if u alreadi havent heard it haha!
This poem is absolutely AWESOME! and yes the caps is neccesary. The flow was very well done and the images portrayed worked very well with the tone. Very Amazing job. My favorite line is every soul needs a seed, amazing idea. Keep up the brilliant work!
Very nice! It has a very strong and clear message which you have conveyed nicely. You have used quite clever rhymes too! Good work! =D
this is awesome! ! ! ! i really love this poem