Sunday, July 31, 2016

Our Song Comments

Rating: 4.5

Summertime's ending but winter is far
Passing the time at the cinema
Sun, swimming pool and buying new clothes
Changing room fun and taking cool photos
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Paul Amrod 03 August 2016

Hi Julie Enjoy the way your words flow. I am American, may I ask what your English heritage is? Greetings, Paul

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Julie Smith 03 August 2016

Thank you Paul. I'm German but I always write in English, it feels so natural to me, thanks again :)

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Paul Amrod 01 August 2016

Hi Julie This would be a very cool lyric. The tune could be funky or hip-hoppy even. Check out some young good musicians and show this very creative poem to him or her. Greetings, Paul

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Julie Smith 03 August 2016

Thanks a lot Paul :) I'll do that

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