Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Our Small Boat Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are in the same small boat. You are in the front, and I’m in the back. We are facing in the same direction.

You are holding a big pair of paddles and paddling very hard to go ahead in the angry thunder storm and crazy rain….in the sea. I am also holding a pair of paddles but small ones.
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Saranya Sanya Ruamsook
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Surya . 03 June 2009

really a touching poem. there is a saying 'tiny drops make an ocean'. any works irrespective of its magnitude matters. u have brought out the message well.posted 10 love surya

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 03 June 2009

It is perhaps one of loveliest 'free verses' that I have ever read. Everything in this poem is vivid and relevant. Great work. 10++

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