Monday, June 5, 2017

Our Romance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our romance is like the sun gleaming.
The moon beaming.
Our romance is like the stars shining so bright.
All through the heavenly night.
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Lamar Cole
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Chinedu Dike 19 November 2017

Your use of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. Beautiful love and romantic poem nicely penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Lamar.

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Rini Shibu 30 September 2017

Romance that is gleaming, beaming, bright, playing, staying, singing, ringing, flowing, growing and never ends.. Excellent poem

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