If you wanna visit Eldorado,
Don't buy tickets! Just rhythm demo!
You can feel alive with yours
Through bullet trains of metaphors
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Keep forwards with unshaken belief Hope triumph for Poet laureate! Beautiful poem!
Stunning poem! It's dedicated to providing our poetry with the best.
like branches of bonsai we may be clipped...caught me really nice poem makes me wanna write poetry thnks
Beautiful written nice rhythm and rhyme, great metaphors! Wonderful poem, thank you for share! Inspired to me these thoughts: Can't stop to think that maybe we should never write with a laurel wreath, in the head, it may not get the magic pen. To be able to touch all kind of hearts we may need to have own heart pierced... People fear to relate through love but they would hardly step back back from empathy with others people's pain.
Well, the poetry is great. the poem is lovely and great. enjoy reading your work. nice, our poetry...
Superb wordplay. I wanna visit your Eldorado again i.e your poetry world.
superb lines dear.... the last stanza was excellent and i enjoyed a lot..: -) » so close«
Wow what metaphor! Enjoyd my ride thru yor read! A poet laureate in d making :)