Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Our Poetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you wanna visit Eldorado,
Don't buy tickets! Just rhythm demo!
You can feel alive with yours
Through bullet trains of metaphors
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COMMENTS
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 October 2012

Wow what metaphor! Enjoyd my ride thru yor read! A poet laureate in d making :)

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Ketan Hukare 06 October 2012

AMAZING! Mind blowing poem! You have a bright future!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

Keep forwards with unshaken belief Hope triumph for Poet laureate! Beautiful poem!

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Zero Ro 20 September 2012

Stunning poem! It's dedicated to providing our poetry with the best.

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Aung Si 20 September 2012

Good sister, good.I appreciate u.

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Sunny Rose 19 September 2012

like branches of bonsai we may be clipped...caught me really nice poem makes me wanna write poetry thnks

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Elena Sandu 18 September 2012

Beautiful written nice rhythm and rhyme, great metaphors! Wonderful poem, thank you for share! Inspired to me these thoughts: Can't stop to think that maybe we should never write with a laurel wreath, in the head, it may not get the magic pen. To be able to touch all kind of hearts we may need to have own heart pierced... People fear to relate through love but they would hardly step back back from empathy with others people's pain.

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Peter Maxharya 18 September 2012

Great work long live poetry long live our art

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 September 2012

Well, the poetry is great. the poem is lovely and great. enjoy reading your work. nice, our poetry...

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Jeanette Telusma 18 September 2012

Great work, ever word came together, keep writing.

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Neela Nath Das 18 September 2012

Superb wordplay. I wanna visit your Eldorado again i.e your poetry world.

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So Close 18 September 2012

superb lines dear.... the last stanza was excellent and i enjoyed a lot..: -) » so close«

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Binish Cd 18 September 2012

wonderful words, really a great poem..............

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