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The inferance to Origami works well for your metaphor. The poem has an implied mystic because it refers to an art form that is steeped in history and culture...very nice mood and texture to this pen

deeply reflective poem. i like the metaphor Origami, for the art fascinates me even today. lovely poem Catrina MAMTA

well woven. marks 10 shan

I will say you should put some of these poetry On the self...with good help you might win a nobel prize one day lol.. good job...

a thought provoking poem, catrina.....nicely crafted with an appropriate end....

lovey catrina this is so calming 10

We certainly do cut out our own pattern in life Catrina - - and make of ourself whomever we wish...... a solemn thought,10 + + + Fay

This is an AWESOME poem. I love origami, and I love how you used origami to describe a person, and their life. Great poem! 10+