Our Own Mistakes Comments

Nature red in tooth and claw. A great comparison made between your life and the life of a fly. A most enjoyable work. Love, Andrew xx

Feelings of entrapment are not that un-common and you put such a personal slant on this issue through this write, I'm sure that many of us can relate to this one, Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan X

Excellent analogy in every line in this wonderful write. Shows a large and giving heart and a pure soul..[p.s. got a spider bite on my big right toe bone, it itches and I don't like spiders]~~~~~~marci.xo. :)

Ernestine, This is very much a truly human condition you have portrayed here. I love the metaphors that you have woven throughout the poem. Very well written indeed. Thank-you, Ashley xo