Thursday, October 1, 2009

Our Octobering. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaves ready to fall
...........................now redden and blush.
Demur in change,
.....................they know October's here.
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COMMENTS
Ruth Walters 18 October 2009

Awwww, I love this poem, what a great one! Ruthie

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Eyan Desir 12 October 2009

well written nice flow....10s

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Bob Blackwell 09 October 2009

As i get older I notice the change of seasons, remind me that life changes constantly. Autumn with its colours red, orange and yellow, warm my heart just like a fire. Fay your lovely poem does the same. I like your new style. LOve Bob

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 October 2009

A prologue to autumn. Lovely poem, Fay. Regards Naseer

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Bob Gibson 04 October 2009

The leaves fall softly on an autumnal day on each one i have penned, what my heart has to say natures parchment is falling, on each one is a rhyme reach out, and catch one, that's if you have time

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Tom Balch 03 October 2009

A lovely Autumninal piece Fay,10+ regards Tom

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Carol Gall 01 October 2009

we penned glorious hues i love this 10

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Lynda Robson 01 October 2009

Wonderful Fay, quite hauntingly written, and so true of October, 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm

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