Our Oasis... Comments

this poem is very well planned, well designed as to what words the author explains..a nice idea bout his expressions..written in lovable way, showing originality, ..for me, this is very nice dear..humble arrangement of words written in a very smart honesty....a unique form of expression..i may not use the good terms but 'smart honesty' is the best description for this piece of yours...hope this poem shows fine feelings, and i am so glad you found love not in reasonable doubts..goodluck to everything..and take it easy hon, it will be fine soo...ALLAH always guide and always protect and most of all, He provides..love this piece of yours, always remember''...love is never be taken for granted'..it is felt and everything follows..lavs ya dear...goodluck...naizz

a very heart felt passionated poem..very well expressed Hazem..10............

The 'oasis of love' should appeal mainly with it, whom like and craving for this emotion. Love is a beauties 'matter' and is happening to not everyone. It sometimes appears to us, that it, not is what we waited for. The prosaic aspects of life sometimes are shattering our illusions and he is manifesting the brutal truth, that we are wrong. After all in spite of disappointments and experiences associated with it, the man is searching for love, partner, fulfilment and it for 'that' fate a long time ago' assigned ', he doesn't only still know what. :) I am greeting and for you - happiness and much true love :) Maria Barbara Korynt

wonderful verses...lovely as such....10

Very sweet great job dear poet...