... Our Mother Nature... Comments

Mother nature can never be ignored. She pays an untimely visit when she is good and ready. A sweet write.

ufff what a nice poem. i just love it. very simplicity and truthess is filled in this poem

LOVELY Writing...hats off to ur talent...keep it up... good wishes

Lovely Poem, You did a good job on the composition and expressing your emotions.

All natural things should be protected.

This earth is our eden, she did not leave us we left her, but we will return to her when we open our eyes to her bounty. A pleasent read, that explores the importance of this paradise

Excellent! I wish all the best as a Great Indian Poet.

so well written sister.... We hope you keep up bringing into light the greatest virtues, we must owe to our mother... so happy to read& wish you to reach great heights in this venture.....

Delicate poem and the addition of personification in mother nature well done displayed here Akanksha! v.goooood work! ! ! _Soul

Nature is stoical, lovely. Thanks for sharing this nice piece.

wow you penned a beautiful masterpiece.. :) my vote is 9.Good job!

That`s why Akanksha we are really paying for our acts of folly... Mother nature ought to be concerned about her children who are averse to her eternal plea for self sustenance and meaningful survival. We, the poets cry from these platforms and remain passive otherwise. At your school let there be an awareness created on the excesses of man against his mother and let your teachers be proud of Miss Akanksha who writes on such universal themes.. Orphaned kids and a deprived earth are going to be synonymous with each other... A good poem my little friend.

Another great poem, we should all listen to what mother nature tells us, life would be better.

nice poem dear you all should ask me how it one feels when there is someone missing in one's life i love your way of composing

thank u all of you..! :)

really very meaningful and great it is very beautifully composed :)

Lovely poem with a great message, to appreciate nature in all it's glory!

That is a brilliant poem. Touching and true. The only person that never says bad about us. Always protecting us. Without them the house looks like a graveyard. Ask those who don't have mothers to know the importance of mothers. hats up. Thanks Akanksha.

Really excellent dear...with some words you completed the meaning perfectly...really meaningfull and i appreciate you: -) ....lets hope the poem may change somebody's thought....good work and gud luck: -)   »so close«