Tuesday, May 14, 2019

Our Loving Shrine Comments

Rating: 5.0

here
the child grassy leaf
dancing her body,
blowing sweetest breeze
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 July 2019

Shrubs! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A vivid portrayal of a shrine bound by eternal love . Beautifully written with compelling imagery.

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Jankovic Zoran 15 May 2019

Great. While I read again like watching a movie, like watching pictures.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 May 2019

hear hear here we all hear well done MB OF BD NO READING ME ? ? ? ?

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2019

here the ants running on one mound to another mound.. this is a real meditation bringing in so many points to come to the final point of love and eternity.. thank u dear poet, tony

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Kostas Lagos 14 May 2019

Here, a poem well written worthy to read again and again!

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