Saturday, August 17, 2013

Our Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your eyes glistening as does the ocean on a summer's day
Rain falls around us, you enfold me in your leather coat
Time stops as you hold me in your arms and time stops
Ten years or so have passed and here we are still
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Beach Girl 28 August 2013

Beautiful and romantic! Love the 'Rain falls around us, you enfold me in your leather coat'. Just this phrase transmits so many senses, sight, touch, smell and sound. Lovely!

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Beautiful poem on Our Love.. Life's beautiful moments are captured and refreshing those memories keep it alive, even after many years.. Loved it Jodie.

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David Wood 28 August 2013

A beautiful love poem of the highest order.

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Patricia Grantham 27 August 2013

Very beautiful and passionate lines on love. Wrapped up in the arms of each other with the look of love. Two lovers with lots of emotions. Please read my poem A lovers Stroll. Enjoyed your write.

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Heather Wilkins 18 August 2013

a nice read about love. our life is children's laughter and never ending summer days. nice thought

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Heather Wilkins 18 August 2013

a nice read about love. our life is children's laughter and never ending summer days. nice thought

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Jodie Hardy

Jodie Hardy

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