Friday, September 8, 2006

Our Love Will Carry On Comments

Rating: 5.0

Early in the morning
When dew's upon the grass
The first bird sings
Calling others to mass
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Rachel Harris
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Steve Hagget 16 September 2006

I like this very much - a really good poem and very well written, you have a real talent, Steve

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 September 2006

Salir>>>A splendored pieceof Verse, here...Stellar use of imagery....crisp, tight structure...fluxion rhythm & rhyme throughout....A Fine Penning''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Ebone' Ingram 15 September 2006

this is great. i envy you because i can't rhyme to save my life. but whatever, this is awesome. keep it up, buddy eni da kid

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Geoff Warden 10 September 2006

A beautiful poem full of passion......................

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Glaedr the poet 08 September 2006

Silence can be bliss when in the company of your significant other :)

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