Monday, January 14, 2008

Our Love Burns In Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

The walls of this room is too close
It’s pressing down on me
like my lonely heart
and my empty bed
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Original Unknown Girl 14 January 2008

Very real pain felt in this write. I understand that pain, it resonates deeply, the line about the scar is understandable too, I hope you get through this pain Pablo, it's a beautifully poignant write. HG: -) xx

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Suicide King 14 January 2008

a very moving piece of poetry...very good, very good...thank you for this art.

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