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Beautiful depiction of bliss of love, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

the sentiments are sliding then....

Although it hurts I will stand still ‘Cause this is both our will. Yearning for joy And sweet harmony On a place with only you and me.. y IT IS FROM BOTH THE SIDES SO NATURALLY IT IS FEELING ALWAYS FINE... LOVELY WRITE AND BEAUTIFUL....10 READ MINE.. ANYWHERE... I MISS... COME HOME

O, this one is my favourite. Truly poetic. Short, but it says it all, absolute gem. It is going on the list of my favourites......10 points