Our love is infinite as the sky
On love’s filmy wings we soar high
It has the might of a mountain
And the upward thrust of a fountain
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The Distinguishing point in your poem is that you are using a brilliant poetic language far away from daily speech, as we notice that you use metaphors, and other rhetoric devices to employ images from the universe into your poetry works, and this may give them a strength and creativity and elegance.
Our love soars like swift birds in flight With the boon of newer vistas in sight It is like the sweet lays of a song All through life, its rhythmic notes do ring
Many poets wrote about love, but this poetry is completely different from the majority, well done 10/10 and to my favourite list.
Our love is infinite as the sky On love’s filmy wings we soar high It has the might of a mountain And the upward thrust of a fountain
Our love is infinite as the sky On love’s filmy wings we soar high It has the might of a mountain And the upward thrust of a fountain..... fantastic beginning having a beautiful definition of love. I appreciate this poem. Visited time and again.
Soulful! So beautifully and appealingly expressed, lovely and very passionate. A smooth flow for joy. Thanks, Prof.
Love alone transcends all attributed and prefixed horizons of human life and true love as immortalised here can cast a spell and it flies in the Sun like a web of gossamer of fine fibre. Here is a definite 10 for this beautifully attired poetic piece. Good sharing too, Valsa mada.
You have sculptured a beautiful image of perfect love! Soaring on the wings of love that never dies...eternal. In four stanzas you had creatively carved it! Thank you for the inspiration!
Even after the sun of our live sets In heaven we shall sing lovers dutes. Very good poem, a feel of love and happiness smoothly flow throughout your poem. Well written and we'll rhymed. Thank you for sharing.
Love is the only reason for survival of all creatures. Beautiful.
Excellent rendition of Our Love All similes and metaphors are apt and sweet. Enjoyed it, Valsa!
Beautiful composition. My best wishes to add on to this wonderful love story.
This is that kind of love that we all long and hope for...a love, that can endure the passage of time, the very essence of it after the burning. Very much enjoyed reading it!
Simply outstanding and amazingly composed with sweet words.....Valsa......you are really great in creation....10
Our love is taller than the mountain and ever lasting as time. Lovely poem with beautiful lines. Enjoyed it. Thank you.
A glorious tribute to immortal love. Exalted, beautiful write! .....10
With so much joy bursting into a vista of love that soars with wings of freedom of happiness, respect and desires of loving each other forever! I love this superb write!
A fabulous poem on love dear madam! Loved reading it....5 stars.