Saturday, August 27, 2011

Our Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

If I cry, would you cry to?
If I yell, would it be at you?
If i'm scared, is it due to when I saw you?
if I smile, will it be because of you?
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Samantha Rose Turner
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Adeline Foster 30 December 2011

Good Poem. Read mine - Impression - Adeline

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Melissa June 29 December 2011

how sweet, nice job! ! !

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Nia Moise 29 December 2011

I am shocked that you're only 12 yet your poems are well written and beautiful, dude you're awesome

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Lauren Atkins 29 December 2011

aww :) i wish i had found true love like you. however i hope its not just a prelude to the other poems you have! its got a great rhythm and it leaves many questions for the readers without it becoming a mind twister. good look in the future ^_^

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Vipins Puthooran 26 December 2011

Interesting.... I like this poem! !

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Samantha Rose Turner

Samantha Rose Turner

New Castle, PA
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