Tuesday, August 16, 2011

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Is it because it's new that we feel the way we do
Or is it real and that's why we want to make a deal.

A deal of a lifetime just you and me surrounded by poetry
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Debra Martin
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Aqeb Benazir 16 August 2011

nicely done! i agree with unwritten soul.

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Zainab Zaheen 16 August 2011

thats so true.. i truly feel what you have written.. keep it up

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2011

Guess you really lost in beautiful emotion...like you said you just surrounded by poetry created by your feelings..i can feel that, coz u sharing the sense in this poem...it has great connection with you..it nice and i can say it's currently true happen in your day now :) _Unwritten Soul

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