Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Our Love Comments

Rating: 3.0

Our love is like the world.
Our love stands strong like the solders,
But is as gentle as a new born baby.
As the stars fall we wish for world peace.
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Brittney Miller
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Joseph Poewhit 25 September 2009

Poem is very expansive on loves dimensions. With the cradle of protection as the lining. - nice - KEEP TRUCKIN

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 September 2009

a lovely poem on love...soldier and a gentle baby....the sun to dry up the rain clouds...very well done....deserves a 10

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Abdul Athani 25 September 2009

what a nice poem indeed i liked it 10+++

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