Thursday, June 6, 2019

Our Lives Comments

Rating: 5.0

So what do we do with our lives?
This hummingbird snippet of life.
We leave only a mark.
Will our stories shine like the sun,
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Shaun Cronick
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Soran M. H 11 January 2020

very nice end to leave the readers with choices...wonderful poem deserves 10/10 excellent

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Shaun Cronick 24 February 2020

Thanks again for your kind remarks Soran glad a great poet as your good self enjoyed it. I thank you again and take care man. And your poem Travels everyone should read more than once. It is spellbinding.

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Jane Campion 30 July 2019

A positive poem for the spark of life.

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Shaun Cronick 04 April 2020

Thank you for your most welcome comment. Take care and I wish you well Jance.

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