Friday, July 8, 2005

Our Little Bethany Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sweet child of love we welcome thee
To share our lives dear Bethany.
A tiny miracle you seem,
Perfect beyond our wildest dream,
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Pete Crowther
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Linda Preston 22 July 2005

What a thoughtful poem, Peter. I'm sure it was appreciated. Of courses the mention of witches could also refer to scary witches in fairy tales!

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Philippa Lane 19 July 2005

A delightfull poem, truly delightful. I love it - and I am sure Bethany's parents love it as well. A lovely piece of work.

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Uriah Hamilton 08 July 2005

Peter, a beautiful poem and your comment about witches after the poem is hip also!

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Peter A. Crowther 08 July 2005

Apologies for line 10 to any witches who might read this poem. I just needed that line for the rhyme. Actually I think witches are very nice and much more likely to cast a good spell than an evil one.

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