Our Life Purpose Comments

nice 'story' and rhyming. it is life and other things which fear me.....at times! i fear NOTHING! MOMMY! ! ! ! Vanessa hit me! ! ! bri " ;) to MyPoemList and into April showcase soon, in my list of P H poems. thanks.

Only a wise, experienced human could have written this wonderful piece.

A lovely poem, Vanessa. Great rhythm, great rhyming. I like the message contained herein, courage and determination to see it through. Well done.

Interesting concept - a very well written poem.

I won't back off from what life throws me I'll hold on tight and enjoy the ride. A beautiful poem on realistic attitude towards life.Well expressed.I really enjoyed it. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Hi. Yea so many talk about a purpose. But what's that? Is there any? No one's sure. We just hear such things from movies or superstitious people I guess. The mission is being itself. Being - existence... If this path is predetermined then I have no choice and I cannot help change my fate, right? Chance? Is not lucky every being on this planet... With every challenge we face come a lesson. It is our doom. Being miserable. The lesson teaches us to bear life though it is not satisfactory. Why should I tolerate this life which I was forced to come. I did not choose to be born, and yet I was born. And now I have to bear this misery of BEINNG! To tolerate this life one should be flexible. Sometimes you have to back off. It is not optional. I din't mean to attack or censure your writing. It is what I generally think about life. I'd be glad to know your ideas about my works. Have a good time..