Tuesday, October 2, 2018

Our Life Is One Comments

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I reside between your breaths
like the moon between stars
like the waves in the ocean
like the wind passing leaves
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M. Asim Nehal
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Shreya Hacks 29 July 2020

Great lines, , , , We live together like the mountains in springtime like oasis in the desert Our life is one like a single soul in two bodies

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Tribhawan Kaul 24 October 2018

Beautiful poem expounding love in various froms. Happy reading and writing.

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T Rajan Evol 11 October 2018

Our life is one like a single soul in two bodies

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2018

You reside like moon between stars and that is why you are calm dazzling Special Moon and recently you have got this title of honour. Oh dear poet Special Moon M. Asim Nehal you have expressed love in this poem very brilliantly. Soul carries love. You are wave in ocean and you are breeze within air. This is an outstanding love poem you have composed....10

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