Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Our Life And Four Seasons Comments

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Birth years and spring days
how it all begins to liven up
we see the light of day
and spring begins to lighten our days
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Vasco M. Resendes
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Poet gulzar hussain ranjoor 22 January 2018

I like you and your poetic views

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 29 November 2014

Thanks to the poet to beautifully making such a poem on different seasons. It accurately tells the feeling. great write up.

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2014

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, Vasco. Congrats for its selection for the day. The treatment of four seasons and their analogy with the stages of life is great.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 November 2014

we bloom with knowledge and love, good writing, thanks..

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Leslie Philibert 29 November 2013

Winter has killed Autumn with frost, the old slaves hide the trees, they cough out ice and fill the ways with hardness. The snow sidelines the fields, black clouds hunt against the pale, crows shatter like glass. Then this is the Winter, brittle and heavy with sleep.

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Tony Karas 29 November 2013

This is an awesome write!

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Alistair Graham 29 November 2013

Four in One In spring I face the shaving mirror In summer I sit to eat my lunch In autumn I cook an evening meal In winter I lie under the duvet

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