Friday, February 17, 2023

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Those of us in uniform
A family does it make
Part is our commitment
And the oath that we do take
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JayJay Maybank
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Rob Lamberton 25 March 2025

"And each day embrace the sunrise and sunset And not fear the setting sun"

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 March 2023

JayJay the poem is outstanding especially the last two lines Bravo!

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Rob Lamberton 25 March 2025

So true!

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3) but, it is the fear of the setting sun that rules them, the rulers. Fantastic poem Emma.

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2) …. to stay in power, to rule them against their will, to befool them. Nothing remains! Not even the shredded bones..

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The last words of a survivor? Yes! Those opt for a life in uniform realises pretty late that "patriotism " is just a word. Which the rules use against ‘the ruled'

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Sorry. Printing error. Please read "Which the RULERS use…"

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