Monday, April 14, 2008

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Strange that a smile
Should slide away like that
As though fallen from her face
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Nellie Isabelle Steward Cooper
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Bonnie Collins 14 April 2008

Very well structured and a feel of sadness.... Very sadly penned.. Excellent write... Bonnie collins

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Jurietta Duraan 14 April 2008

Stunning poem! ! ! 'eyes drawing their shutters'... very good image - there is a sense of melancholy which holds me to attention. Yuri *

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