Sunday, April 20, 2008

...Our Last Dove... Comments

Rating: 5.0

A seed that holds within a tree
Smile, gleaming ay of happiness
Has now to pay such great a fee
Eyes; now filled with deep nothingness
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Dmitriy Kokarev
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Greenwolfe 1962 20 April 2008

I gave this poem a ten because it was one of the best technical poems I have read. Your rhythm and rhyme were excellant. Outstanding! Just outstanding! GW62

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Tashkent - Uzbekistan
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