Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Our Last Dance Comments

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All the memories of you eternally etched into my soul,
Once you made me smile yet now only tears flow.
What happened to us? We were loves young dream,
Were we meant to fail so badly? I just don't understand.
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Elmer Galleta 18 October 2020

Relates to my memories

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Unwritten Soul 30 November 2011

Last dance, maybe you dissolved in space, full of memory, listened to melancholy music along as you move..where the steps done in perfect same not a mistake one (when heart broken) ...If the great thing was happen and if you dancing again...never finish the dance, keep the last one to be done for one time...the time that the last day for the last step you to dance...for last breathe where the dance utterly always in heart_Unwritten Soul

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Silentpoet Grl 29 November 2011

wonderful write - such emotion- 'flame of bitterness' love the imagery! great job!

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