Saturday, March 28, 2009

Our Land Of Make Believe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Relaxing back, we dream of things
imagining they could happen some way,
a meeting taking place
in a romantic rendezvous,
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David, I don't think any poets would disagree with this one. We are the lucky ones who can see beyond the dust of everyday life. Very beautifully expressed.

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Sid John Gardner. 28 March 2009

This describes perfectly the world of the person who's biography I am writing...Marvellous writing sir.You get better and better. Sid.

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Catrina Heart 28 March 2009

In the land of make believe where people's hope lies, where the dreamer continues to struggle to live and survive all the adversaries of life..........10

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Tsira Goge 28 March 2009

our heaven on earth in our land of make believe. ........................................... It is a remarkable phrase... Best wishes.

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T McH 28 March 2009

Tomorrow is always another day where dreams may come true. Make Believe? I hope not. t x

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Fiona Davidson 28 March 2009

And what a beautiful world it is David...lovely write...10+++

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