Press me against your warm, carmel face.
Look at me with your warm, carmel eyes.
Your carmel cloaks my arms in your embrace.
You give your carmel milk to one who cries.
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Possibly you repeat ' carmel' too much, but still a sincere, moving invocation to the Blessed Virgin of Mt. Carmel.
A most precise rhyme scheme, and some fine metaphors.
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Possibly you repeat ' carmel' too much, but still a sincere, moving invocation to the Blessed Virgin of Mt. Carmel. A most precise rhyme scheme, and some fine metaphors.