Monday, September 5, 2016

Our Individual Cheese Comments

Rating: 5.0

How can you shoot for the stars if the sky is the limit?
Why should I accept my flaws if I'm in it to win it?
They tell me I'm too old to laugh and play, and too young to understand
Some call me a kid and others say I'm a fine young man
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Daniel Pace
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Tom Billsborough 07 September 2016

Unlike Judith, I love cheese! It's hard to believe you are only 19. This is a very mature piece, well constructed and developed with intelligence. I shall read your other poems now. Judith recommended you and I shall thank her.

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2016

A thoughtful, inspirational and nicely written piece, Daniel. Thanks

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Daniel Pace

Daniel Pace

Salt Lake City, Utah
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