Sunday, August 20, 2023

Our House Our Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our house is not the biggest house…to some it may even seem small…
but I'm amazed at the amount of memories housed within its walls.

Our home has seen many seeds of love…planted…nurtured…encourage to bloom…
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 28 September 2023

Good message. Nice diction. Congrats Jim

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 September 2023

Congrats being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 September 2023

a narrative poem about the house of the writer of this poem, now that the children have long since left home there is more room for memories, you just have to close your eyes. What is striking is that only good, sweet memories come up, the bad ones do not come up, a small minus, but TOP Marks Full.

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Jayne Louise Davies 27 September 2023

Congratulations! A very well deserved member poem of the day! Top marks and to my favourites x

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Bharati Nayak 27 September 2023

A well deserving Poem of The Day! Hearty congratulations Jim Yerman! In fact I have read many of your poems which are so wonderful and deserve to be on the first page of Poem Hunter.

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Bharati Nayak 27 September 2023

Let me quote, 'I imagine the magic in our house…in any home…large or small… is not only the memories painted in it's rooms…it's halls…its welcoming front door… It's the fact that in a home already awash in memories…. there is always room for more.'

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Bharati Nayak 27 September 2023

A great poem about home! From start to finishing line, the poem held my breath!

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