Tuesday, June 2, 2020

Our Hope For Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is a bucket with a hole at the bottom.
It always looks so full as we deposit
Our share of little drops of love and hope,
Frustrating as we add to it our share of
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Savita Tyagi
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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 October 2020

You have some wonderful hopes. Keep them alive!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2020

Our hope is for a just society and our demand Is for sincere and compassionate leaders, Not for the ones who think and behave As if the life is created for the partnership Of dominant and dominated.........I love these lines. This concluding Stanza is full of inspiration, hope and right demands. Well executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 June 2020

excellent poem penned about the life and hope Life is name of surviving on the earth though someone defines it as living eternity (afterlife) and the hope is a full colorful canvas where life can take any taste of known and unknown events.......

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Comparison of life to a leaky bucket is apt. We add sorrow and happiness but everything gets leaked out except a drop of hope for peace and justice...10

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Savita Tyagi 06 June 2020

Thank you so much Damodaran ji for reading and writing a very supportive comment.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 June 2020

Unfortunately the vested interests with muscle power who sponsored globalization, etc have transformed the way of life in our world into a corporate affair. The sharks in it to establish dominance. Common people have no choice or voice and they have to suffer this way or that way. They can only hope for a peaceful life, in my opinion. Thanks for sharing thought provoking poem.10 points.

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Savita Tyagi 06 June 2020

Thank you so much Ratnakarji for reading and writing a very thoughtful comment.

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Frank Sheehan 02 June 2020

Nice write. Great take on life.

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