Thursday, April 12, 2018

Our Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

Neither silver nor gold we have none 
But i believe we can change the world of err 
Our father's days had gone 
It's our time to change the evil air 
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Tosin Adesokan
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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2019

A fine and lofty verse well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation written with conviction.

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Adeleke Elijah 16 May 2018

Add a comment. I Really Like You Tosin. You Wrote A Reasonable Poem

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 April 2018

Write comment. A great didactic start, Tosin. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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