Saturday, January 17, 2009

! ! ! Our Holiday Memories! ! ! Comments

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Holding hands,
beach's white sands,
an evening walk,
an overnight talk,
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wonderful poem i love it.. Great write Krista

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memories eh. they tell us where we can go, where we shoudl not go. etc. I love memories. Have great day bro. great peice

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<font color =fusha>Amy 30 January 2009

'you are, aren't you? ' loved the line and how it was delivered in your poem nice write

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Joseph Poewhit 30 January 2009

The written word transmits more feeling

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Lynda Robson 30 January 2009

Good flow and imagery, memories of a holiday, thanks for sharing it with us, 10 Lynda xx

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J. P. Dullahan 30 January 2009

A poem's much better than any photograph at capturing memories - great writes! :)

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Reihaneh Jalalian 18 January 2009

it was fantastic it was beautiful i loved it so much well done 10

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