Wednesday, December 1, 2004

Our Heart - Renewed Comments

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I made a heart for us again, my love.
Here on the beach.
It has our names inside,
is within reach.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 December 2004

Thanks Allan, I could get used to your kind comments..... Looking forward to your calm one (inspiration could come from the movie with Nicole kidman 'Dead Calm'. Best wishes H

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Allan James Saywell 01 December 2004

I can draw a little from this poem herbert, i wrote a poem 'jane'i used the line for ever for eternity, i like this piece of work, i feel calm perhap's i will write a calm poem today Warm regard's Allan

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